I thought this was an interesting read. You can see that the seeds of what would become Star Trek were already growing.
Also, despite the name “Transporter” sounding familiar, his description of it is closer to a holodeck. It “transports” the user to different scenarios. Wild.
It unreasonably annoys me that he wrote “television, smellevision, soundevision” and not television, telesmell, telesound"
Roddenberry really just said whatever came to mind, whenever something came to mind.
He grew up with the Graphvision and Phonevision brand rip offs so it’s all be knew.
You’re dead wrong, it’s totally reasonable.